2015年1月3日星期六

the kid see a world


the kid see a world
today ascend picture lesson, the teacher says to us:The topic that paints today is a kid to see a world!Everyone listenned to, discussion in succession, does this how draw?The teacher says:Everyone must be very strange and how draw?Is in fact easy, teacher's request BE, each classmate makes uniform a big eyes, then you see of thought of of the painting is in big eyes, not very good?, Is such, everyone listenned to all enthusiasm upsurge and full of beansly started to write to draw.
I like swiming most , so I the painting ascended in my big eyes very blue ocean, sea bird, also have the color colorful rainbow.I see to sit at the same table, ha ha, he drew one in his big eyes section plenteous apple tree, I estimate that he is to want to eat an apple?Sit on the classmate of my behind, drew a seesaw in big eyes, slipped slide, seemed amusement park
quick class is over, the teacher chose a few paintings of classmates to display to let us see, what everyone drew doesn't same alike is each, but each special feature, very interesting.Some female kids drew doll, plants, the male kid who have drew tank big gun, birds and beasts
this stanza picture lesson can be really interesting. After the Ju ground in rules in the composition completes, the foundation that can get hold of structure cent, but if use some methods let article of the structure seem to be more skillful, attraction the reader's eyeball, will on the structure cent in article up be added a cent.Below introduce a few kinds to let the composition conceive outline more skillful method, hope to have a help to each early high school student. 1, the constitution hang a pronunciation constitution to hang to read the best way nothing is better than in establish to ask in the beginning, in the composition beginning then ask a question for reader, the form can be to ask a sentence as well as only is a description, but usually seem to be fantastic in the affair of beginning and not agree with normal regulations, so the ability produce a question in the reader's heart and lead its interest, let it produce to expect to the continuation mental. Is a sky such as 《match seller's little girl 》 beginning cold pole, snow snow, again quickly black.(Next 88)this is a year of the last day-Lunar New Year's Eve.In this cold and black evening, a light wears a head barefoot little girl to walk down the street.This beginning relatively has an attraction, because it established a lot of questions for reader.What is the little girl a stem?Being so cold sky of is still a Lunar New Year's Eve.She why a person walk down the street, also baldheaded barefoot?The reader naturally wants to downwards read. 2, suppress a Yang method so-called suppress Yang of method, after including to suppress first Yang or first the Yang suppress behind.What this method says is be you truely want to express a certain praise or blame emotion of time, don't express in the beginning, but come out in the beginning contrary aspect performance, immediately after just started expressing the expressional aspect that you think.If the novel of gold Yong 《smile the Ao river's lake 》 depiction makes blunt teacher Yue of fox not cluster, then with the desire suppress the skill of Yang first, start Yue not the cluster describe into a Ci father good teacher of image, gave the gentleman sword that his virtuous personage takes it as a great honor the title;But arrive a behind, this Ci father make use of daughter's happiness to attain private interest, this good teacher kill oneself's disciple for selfishness.Open gentleman sword in really and completely cunning mean person, bring about Wu Lin Zhong's Xing breeze blood rain for greed.Thus too many of need not language descriptions, only front and back a contrast, the despicable its human nature exposes entirely.But 《the absolute being vulture Xia Lyu 》 description over then used the desire Yang suppresses first of skill. Suppress a Yang method actually is contrast thinking of a kind of, writing want to notice.The purpose of suppressing is a Yang, suppress of contents for the sake of betterly Yang.Finally want to express the meaning that you want to express most . 3, the misunderstanding method misunderstanding come from interpersonal or the false comprehension of the person to the thing.Misunderstanding the method is to point in the literature work, a square of the person brings about misunderstanding on another square(or a certain matter), or 2 people misunderstand each other and cause an antinomy thus and push details development and make thus the great waves of person emotion in multiple layers pass into, versatile.The so-called person is expensive to keep, text expensive song, monotonous is a composition to greatly hate, but want to let the article rise and fall to fall Dang, moving, the Qiao establishes a misunderstanding not to lose to a kind of good method. There is for example one testing a full marks composition to be called 《misunderstanding 》 , start writing me in the article because the world rain parents didn't give that get sick of I send an umbrella but make me mistaken for parents not to love me, see afterwards the note that the mother leaves just know that the parents are to want to toughen me, it makes me able to grow up better, I understand the parents' care and love to me after knowing that this is that misunderstand.This is the example that typically uses to misunderstand a method to come to hang for article constitution to read. Use this method to need to be noticed must give an account after finishing writing a misunderstanding this is misunderstanding, and need to give an account that host's Mr. knows that this is after misunderstanding of mental state reaction.

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